TimerClock14's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragonborn Comes(8-bit)!]

This summary thing is pissing me off

I like it a lot!

In the beginning, however, I would change up a few things.

You have it going down the scale for each bar. Kind of a do-du-dahhhhhh sort of beat. I would suggest, on the 3rd bar for that rhythm, have it start up higher on the scale and go down. Making it kind of like de-da-dohhhh. If that makes any sense. :D

If it doesn't make any sense, just PM me and I can show you what I mean lol.

Either way, it needs to pick up at some parts as well. Towards the end, it really should be going much faster, even if it's just more drums. But it's really missing some speed at that part.

Either way, I liked it overall. Good melody, good idea, and good potential.
3/5
6/10

rakan610 responds:

Thank you :D

[Digital Demons]

Summary

This is good. I like it.

My only issue is that no matter how much you change up the chords, no matter how much you change up the instruments, I still hear the same rhythm. It makes the entire piece monotonous and hard to stay interested in. Try working with faster/longer notes. (I'd suggest faster notes accompanied by long pad-like sounds)

Aside from that, the only thing that needs some work is your mixing, and probably your drums.

Good work!
4/5
8/10

[==(Solace)==]

. . . ! :o

Doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo d

Dis shit

is fukin epic.

You win, sir.

[(Day1) new adventure]

I like!

So far so good. I like everything about it. :D

5/5
10/10

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

haha there still alot to be done to this :D lately ive been useing super simple synths :D and idk XD the songs are vary simple just a few tricks to make awesome sounds is all o.o ill let you know when i get this done :D

[(Day1) Memorial (remix)]

God, this summary thing is annoying

Oh man, this is soooooo chill... I love it! :D

When the drums came in, it was just...Chiiiillllll......like, orgasmic chill.

Glitches!!! <3 :D :D :D

Doood, this is so freaking chill. I love this!!!

I have no criticisms here. :D
10/10
5/5

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

haha well thanks ^^ should really check out the brand tho cos there full of amasing things ^^ ill let you know when i get this 1 done ^^

[Day1 - tc14 (kirby) w.i.p]

NOICE!

Definitely needs some moar work. As you mentioned, those samples need some adjusting. But I really like what you did with this!

Mastering is a bit shaky in some areas, so that needs to be tightened up. It's a little much in the high end. Mess with the pitch a bit on those higher synths. :\

And most importantly, YOU HAZ NEED MOOOAAAARRRRR BASS.

[Flashback (Dubstep)]

Insanely repetitive.

Your synths need lots of work, the entire melody needs more variation, and most importantly your wobbles need more substance.

The synth I hear at the very start of the song is good. It's a nice pad sound with some epic flair to it.

Drums are good, but you should add some more hats to vary it a bit and make it more interesting.

Your melody...oh god. It's good, but it just keeps repeating over and over again. You need a combo breaker that's not the drop.

This does have some serious potential, though. That main wobble in the drop is almost there, just needs some more texture. If you have it, camelphat will work wonders for you here.

Your drop also needs more variation. It's incredibly boring after the first measure or two. Add some lazers, or some random FX or even better, add some different wobbles here and there. Do some experimenting!

2/5
4/10

Lots of potential, with some more work this could be a seriously epic song.

[Best Song Everrr]

Seriously, don't do this.

I hate to rain on your parade, but that made my ears bleed.

momboom1 responds:

I love you.

[Guba]

Just a few things. :O

It's good but a few parts are kinda off:

at 0:44 that chord on the guitar is kinda muddy, try finding a new chord and mess with the notes.

After the drums come in a can't help but hear a lot of resonance in the high and low ends. Some EQ is needed there.

It needs an ending!

And on a slightly unrelated note:
Your guitar is so epic, I love it.

MrPlayboy responds:

sorry i took so long man, thanks for the review! you are right about the EQ im using audio sandbox and didnt noticed it x)

[his funeral, her memories]

Gorgeous.

Oh wow, It's been a while since I listened to classical here on NG and I'm glad I did.

This is absolutely gorgeous. My only criticism is that you should have made it longer! It's too short! D:

But seriously, this is incredible.

reel2 responds:

Thank you very much! Merry xmas 2 you :)