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Mastering needs some fine tuning.

First off, welcome to the grounds! :D

Very well done song! Kind of reminds me of Where My Keys by deadmau5.

The melody and instruments are superb. I love the kind of dark, quirky mood you set up. But around 1:43 the synth that comes in overpowers the entire track. I'm not sure if that was intended, but I didn't really like it.

Overall I liked it a lot. Just that one bit at 1:43 kinda threw the track out of balance. But other than that it was awesome.

5/5
9/10

LyssDJ responds:

thank you :) and yes the synth was intended to be a bit loud to keep hold of your attention and to give it spunk. also, i have to admit.. this is a good song to walk, drive, work, and game to. its moving. i appreciate your comment of awsomeness mr. timerclock14

may the force be with you -Lyss-

Dude! This is awesome!

This is epic! It's insane, it's got dynamics, and I love the stop-go vibe you had going towards the end!

NOW MAKE IT LONGER!!!

5/5
10/10

EPIC!

I love every part of it. Most notably the outro.

5/5
10/10

Yay!

All my 5 and 10 r belong to this. =D

I'd like a punchier snare, cuz the drums atm are kinda all ninja like and stuff right now; not standing out too much, but still there.

Just my 2 cents. =D

Or4nges responds:

I was trying to focus a bit more on melody this time around. I had so much ninja snare going around that if it was any punchier it'd be really distracting D:

2 cents much appreciated though. Maybe i'll find a way to make it work.

MUCHAS GRACIAS!

Not really satisfied.

I think I may have been expecting a bit too much from this, so I'm going to keep this review quick and dirty.

I have 2 main issues with the track:
1. Needs to flow better -- some of the transitions, or lack thereof could use a lot of improvement. The track feels choppy at some parts, and a lot of the time nothing carries over segments with so much as even some reverb or a delay or anything. It's very, idk, unfitting, I guess.

2. The last segment was incredibly epic. I am disappoint that this it wasn't continued upon to a proper ending. :|

4/5
8/10

I don't like this title thingy.

Yo! I heard you like xKore so I put some Dub in your step. :|

Instant fave on this remix. Loved the original too. :D

If you don't get famous before I die imma come back from the grave and haunt you, got it?

5/5
10/10

OMFG I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

Yes! Awesome! Epic! Incredible!

I can't even begin to portray how much I love that melody, let a lone over the internet.

The only thing I want to see in this is a lot more depth from the synth used in the melody. Maybe add in a mid or even a low, bass-ish kinda synth. Just to make it more concrete.

Anyways. OMG EPIC YES EPIC. MOAR! I WANT MOAR.!!!!

5/5
10/10

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

mids are planed to be lfo based after i get the tops filled out :D and the rest of the song done ;)
+ the bass i used is vary complex so the mids are going to be vary tricky XD

Enter summary.

I know you're tired of hearing people talk about how this could be improved. But I love this song and I'm giving you a review anyways.

Number 1 most important thing: I LOVE IT.

If you have trouble finishing a song you could always look for someone who's willing to collab. :D

I think the snare is fine as is, a little more volume wouldn't hurt, though. But if you absolutely need a punchier sound, try messing with the pogo knob. Works wonders for me.

On a rather unrelated note, my recycling bin is floating away...I should probably go get it.

Back to the song.
That bass is gorgeous. Definitely save that one to the presets.

I'm sad to hear that you've given up on this song. It's beautiful and has so much potential. But what's done is done I guess.

5/5
10/10

OMG SPOILER: Kingdom is beast. I can't wait for the finished version.

Nechura responds:

Woah, big review. Okay, yeah I was thinking about sending it off to someone to collab on but I know it probably still wouldn't motivate me to finish it. As I've said in the past, just gonna' quit while I'm ahead and work on other stuff.

And yeah, I've been saving all my good patches for a while now, might even release a pack one day. Anyways, thanks for the review man. I haven't worked on Kingdom in ages but I will get it done eventually. I'll let you know. Thanks again.

Cool.

Yeah, it's a good sound. Now make it into a song. :D

Btw, what'd you use to make this?

sowordlife responds:

I used massive to make it within flstudio :D

FUCKING CORISSANT

How did this not make top 5? <=0

NG sucks now.... (j/k)

I HAVE to know where you got that croissant bit. :D

Btw, epic song. I love the goofy feeling with the accordion bits throughout the song. :D Just makes it so jolly. I lol at this song every time it plays on my iPod.

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10/10

Indigorain responds:

Well, the original fucking croissant bit is from a song from Jamie T called 'me and my bass guitar'. At least something like that.
But this one was from something from youtube where two guys were just screaming it for about 7 seconds :P
Just search it fucking croissant on youtube, you'll find it, as a tribute to jamie T :P
Thanks anyway for the review and the kind words man, it's really appreciated! :D

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