LOL THAT WAS AWESOME
Dude, this made my day.
I wanna see you use the vocals a bit more in this one. :D Glitch it up through the drop and kinda sprinkle it over where it sounds good.
Also, you need some hats.
But other than those two things it's FREAKING AWESOME. xD
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yayy for randomness :D want the voc thing i maid them from?
haha yea this was thrown together real fast o.o
Skexy.
You are getting a lot better as you expand to new genres! I can tell from just listening. :D
Cheezy saw melody is awesome. Love the vocal samples, but they are too quiet. You need to bring them out more. OMG THOSE WOBBLES. <3
I'd only want you to add in more chaos! Like a drop kick here, or a crash there. Make it chaotic! :D
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THANKS! :D
I thought the vocals were ok, but I'll check that out.
I'm not gonna change that much about it anymore, I'm pretty satisfied with the result, but THANKS.
Awesome review!
Did I thank you yet?
Mastering needs some fine tuning.
First off, welcome to the grounds! :D
Very well done song! Kind of reminds me of Where My Keys by deadmau5.
The melody and instruments are superb. I love the kind of dark, quirky mood you set up. But around 1:43 the synth that comes in overpowers the entire track. I'm not sure if that was intended, but I didn't really like it.
Overall I liked it a lot. Just that one bit at 1:43 kinda threw the track out of balance. But other than that it was awesome.
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thank you :) and yes the synth was intended to be a bit loud to keep hold of your attention and to give it spunk. also, i have to admit.. this is a good song to walk, drive, work, and game to. its moving. i appreciate your comment of awsomeness mr. timerclock14
may the force be with you -Lyss-
Yay!
All my 5 and 10 r belong to this. =D
I'd like a punchier snare, cuz the drums atm are kinda all ninja like and stuff right now; not standing out too much, but still there.
Just my 2 cents. =D
I was trying to focus a bit more on melody this time around. I had so much ninja snare going around that if it was any punchier it'd be really distracting D:
2 cents much appreciated though. Maybe i'll find a way to make it work.
MUCHAS GRACIAS!
OMFG I LOVE IT SO MUCH.
Yes! Awesome! Epic! Incredible!
I can't even begin to portray how much I love that melody, let a lone over the internet.
The only thing I want to see in this is a lot more depth from the synth used in the melody. Maybe add in a mid or even a low, bass-ish kinda synth. Just to make it more concrete.
Anyways. OMG EPIC YES EPIC. MOAR! I WANT MOAR.!!!!
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mids are planed to be lfo based after i get the tops filled out :D and the rest of the song done ;)
+ the bass i used is vary complex so the mids are going to be vary tricky XD
Enter summary.
I know you're tired of hearing people talk about how this could be improved. But I love this song and I'm giving you a review anyways.
Number 1 most important thing: I LOVE IT.
If you have trouble finishing a song you could always look for someone who's willing to collab. :D
I think the snare is fine as is, a little more volume wouldn't hurt, though. But if you absolutely need a punchier sound, try messing with the pogo knob. Works wonders for me.
On a rather unrelated note, my recycling bin is floating away...I should probably go get it.
Back to the song.
That bass is gorgeous. Definitely save that one to the presets.
I'm sad to hear that you've given up on this song. It's beautiful and has so much potential. But what's done is done I guess.
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OMG SPOILER: Kingdom is beast. I can't wait for the finished version.
Woah, big review. Okay, yeah I was thinking about sending it off to someone to collab on but I know it probably still wouldn't motivate me to finish it. As I've said in the past, just gonna' quit while I'm ahead and work on other stuff.
And yeah, I've been saving all my good patches for a while now, might even release a pack one day. Anyways, thanks for the review man. I haven't worked on Kingdom in ages but I will get it done eventually. I'll let you know. Thanks again.
Cool.
Yeah, it's a good sound. Now make it into a song. :D
Btw, what'd you use to make this?
I used massive to make it within flstudio :D
FUCKING CORISSANT
How did this not make top 5? <=0
NG sucks now.... (j/k)
I HAVE to know where you got that croissant bit. :D
Btw, epic song. I love the goofy feeling with the accordion bits throughout the song. :D Just makes it so jolly. I lol at this song every time it plays on my iPod.
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Well, the original fucking croissant bit is from a song from Jamie T called 'me and my bass guitar'. At least something like that.
But this one was from something from youtube where two guys were just screaming it for about 7 seconds :P
Just search it fucking croissant on youtube, you'll find it, as a tribute to jamie T :P
Thanks anyway for the review and the kind words man, it's really appreciated! :D
Starts off ambient, then goes all over the place.
The biggest thing I noticed was the lack of structure in this song. It's there, but you just need to develop it a bit more.
The kick needs to be the loudest element of your song and needs to have the most bass out of anything. Try looking into mastering. There are a bunch of tutorials on youtube, I'm sure you'll find something.
More on the kick, it helps to layer kick samples together. A typical guideline for layering kicks is to have 3 layered together, one for the sub bass, one with a lot of mid frequencies, and the other being a punchy, higher frequency sound.
You have a knack for guitar, it sounds really good here, but doesn't fit quite well with the tone of the track. The guitar you use here is a really powerful instrument that needs to be the center of the melody in this track. Try adjusting the mood of the track towards the guitar so it doesn't sound so unusual when it comes in.
The synth in the beginning is very high pitched. You should route that through a channel in the mixer and play around with the chorus and flanger effects.
There's a lot of potential in this track, it just needs more structure.
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Thank You, Your Comment is helpfull. I'm just learning to use FL Studio, and for the tutorials, I'm French, So You know it isn't easy to find one. I watch some english tutoriels on youtube, but it's not easy to understand. =D
Thank You Again for your comment and your rating.
You must be angry at wade.
Go punch a pillow or something. Please don't post these kinds of things. They spam up the audio portal.
If you intend on making a serious song out of this, then here's what I think about it:
Drums are good. But try adding a hat to fill up the empty beats. Maybe go off on a four to the floor beat?
Vocals have a good sync with the beat. But the tone and such are really off. If you can find some vocal samples those would be much better than fruity voice synthesizer, (that is what you used, right?)
Needs moar bass.
Needs moar melody.
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