TimerClock14's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ugly Truth]

Nicely done.

Just needs to be a little longer.

5/5
9/10

NordicHazard responds:

thx for the review! yeah it is a bit short, might think about a longer version.

[Six Grands Three Fingers]

Timing is definitely off.

The timing is way off in some parts. I love the melody and the progression, but the missed/off beat notes are really killing it for me.

4/5
8/10

monkeycat responds:

I agree, strangely enough it sounds better with strings I think... Will keep working on it. Thanks for the review...

[Nechura - Inbound]

I remember seeing this on SoundCloud a while back.

I love this one so much. Especially the synth that comes in at 1:50. That one just killed me.

Also: not as repetitive as you think it is. That's how trance is supposed to be, lol.

Summary:
Awesomebeansauce.
5/5
10/10

Nechura responds:

Thanks :).

[Evak/gabber!(wip)]

Like your style a lot.

The chaos is entrancing. 0.0 But not enough chaos IMO.

Just to toss ideas out there, on top of your current bass line, you could have another bass line that's more pronounced and works with the melody. (I think that's called a Harmony in music theory, but w/e) Anyways, just an idea.

5/5
9/10

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

ive learned alot more about bass since ive maid this i needa make the bass stronger but its hard to keep the kicks strong when theres alot of bass?
harmony is basicly when there not the same not but they sound good cos they make a new note . ie if you play to sounds 1 two steps higher it sounds good together. but i havent touched this song cos theres so much layers its really confuseing XD

[(Day1) Evolution]

Nicely done.

Transitions could use some work, though.

I like the melody progression and that LFO is just nasty. :D

5/5
8/10

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

all toxic baby! so many melody's! make it hard to transition XD
i think theres at the end 4 lfos and 4 lead synths + bass + sweeps and tuns
of filters haha but ill work on it! :D

[Drop it! (Preview)]

Cool

Loving the spooky vibe in the beginning. (Hipass filters ftw)

Sorry if this sounds rather useless, but something about the drums before the drop is kinda weird to me. I can't really tell what though.

Either way. Nice track, mind if I ask what you use to make your synths?

joshlul responds:

The low frequency cutoff on them is down, I am ultra sensitive to high pitched noises so I have a tendency to over-compensate for harsh mids.

Did you change your review? hahaha, I use massive and synthesize everything from scratch.

[Scary Monsters (Remix)]

Not impressed.

This is a nice remix, you got your own style and applied it to an amazing song. I think you could have done better with it, though.

I'm going to be brutally honest. As it is now, I'd rather listen to the original song.

One thing you could do to improve upon it is to go a little crazy with it. Step out of your comfort zone a bit. Make it dirty, filthy, so filthy that you wanna take a shower every waking moment that you spend on making this song....Ok maybe not THAT dirty, but you get the idea.

jpbear responds:

Specify what "dirty" means. This song is already too fuzzy/muddy as it is. Your review practically demands that this remix be "better" than the original, when this song is made by an amteur and is free to download and is unsigned.

Ok you prefer the original, so do I. Give me skrillex' paycheck and ill fix this up for you.

Your suppsoed to rate me on the NG scale not the "derp i liek skrillex more than this amateur" scale.

[-Forever Fantasy-]

Very well done.

Your songs always make me feel nostalgic, remembering back to when I would play all those RPGs like Zelda, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, and some others.

I think you should seriously consider applying for a job at Square Enix. You got the stuff, man.

5/5
10/10

ChronoNomad responds:

All these reviews are making me seriously consider it. I've always wanted a good excuse to go back to Japan...

Thanks for reviewing! Always happy to supply some much-appreciated nostalgia.

[=Nosia=]

Foundation.

I listen to this and I see a skyscraper of potential. I very much agree with the guy below, you should look into custom sounds, eq'ing, and mastering (definitely). I kind of see this song as a foundation for that skyscraper of potential.

To put it differently:
You've got a good ear for music; that's important. But you lack your own personal touch, which is very important as it differentiates your songs from the rest. I'd definitely look into what kind of tones you really like, or a beat that really gets you. Find something like that and apply it to your songs, I assure you it will turn out great.

But for this song, It's well done, but kind of "meh".
I'm looking forward to your future works!
4/5
8/10

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

noted

Thank you for the critique:]

[[oove] Requiem]

BEST DROP EVAR

That drop at the end is just like....MINDFUCK

You're all like wtf!? and then it drops and your just like HOLY AS;LJDKGAJLDFGAKJ;SDLKFAJ;

Mind = blown

5/5
10/10

broove responds:

Overall I'm satisfied with the ending aswell. Thanks for stopping by.