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Y U NO FINISH

Y U NO FINISH THIS WIP?

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Starts off ambient, then goes all over the place.

The biggest thing I noticed was the lack of structure in this song. It's there, but you just need to develop it a bit more.

The kick needs to be the loudest element of your song and needs to have the most bass out of anything. Try looking into mastering. There are a bunch of tutorials on youtube, I'm sure you'll find something.

More on the kick, it helps to layer kick samples together. A typical guideline for layering kicks is to have 3 layered together, one for the sub bass, one with a lot of mid frequencies, and the other being a punchy, higher frequency sound.

You have a knack for guitar, it sounds really good here, but doesn't fit quite well with the tone of the track. The guitar you use here is a really powerful instrument that needs to be the center of the melody in this track. Try adjusting the mood of the track towards the guitar so it doesn't sound so unusual when it comes in.

The synth in the beginning is very high pitched. You should route that through a channel in the mixer and play around with the chorus and flanger effects.

There's a lot of potential in this track, it just needs more structure.

4/5
7/10

etK responds:

Thank You, Your Comment is helpfull. I'm just learning to use FL Studio, and for the tutorials, I'm French, So You know it isn't easy to find one. I watch some english tutoriels on youtube, but it's not easy to understand. =D

Thank You Again for your comment and your rating.

You must be angry at wade.

Go punch a pillow or something. Please don't post these kinds of things. They spam up the audio portal.

If you intend on making a serious song out of this, then here's what I think about it:
Drums are good. But try adding a hat to fill up the empty beats. Maybe go off on a four to the floor beat?
Vocals have a good sync with the beat. But the tone and such are really off. If you can find some vocal samples those would be much better than fruity voice synthesizer, (that is what you used, right?)
Needs moar bass.
Needs moar melody.

1/5
3/10

imSUCHApr0 responds:

NO U IM DA BE5T
UR JU5T MAD DDAT U HAV A TINY KOK

Hahahaha, cool!

I gave it a 9 because it doesn't really loop that well. :\

Otherwise it's really neat. It's simple, it's moody, and I can definitely see this (with a little more work) in a flash. :)

5/5
9/10

Insert title here.

Not much to say about this one.

Nice background music for sure. I can't really find much wrong with this.

5/5
10/10

cyan11 responds:

Many thanks

Wow.

I don't listen to Gen. Rock that much anymore but this was....wow. You, sir, have some skills.

I'd have to say my fave part was the chill guitar outro. +1 for that. :)

5/5
10/10

cyan11 responds:

Thank you!

Couple tips.

The drums in the beginning kinda stutter and jump a bit.

1:17 is beast. I love that synth you used there. Mind if I ask what you used to make it?

You need a better transition around 1:40. Maybe add a subtle crash that's side chained to one of the synths there. Possibly even a pad in the background might help?

Overall I like the song. Not exactly soothing, but definitely a really chill track.

4/5
7/10

I like.

I really wish I had the full version of FL right now. I would take you up on that collab in a heartbeat. >_>

On to the actual song:
The intro needs some serious shortening. I started getting bored at around 0:20. The melody is really cool, but towards the end it sounded a little off tune.

I like the beat though.

4/5
8/10

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

the idea behind the song was to work from the hard style to dub step and im use ta hardcore witch tends to be more outta tune ... intro well its hardstyle every good hard style seems to have long boreing intros XD i plan on adding more filler so its not just the kick :D
maybe when i get more done on this you will have it XD

WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!?

The first 10 seconds is just a hipass filter. I mean, who DOESN'T like hipass filters? They are super awesome! Speaking of awesome, this track is epic. I love the synth. I gather you made it in 3xOsc? That's pretty darn epic. I'm actually working on a song using 3xOsc for my main synth too, but that's off topic.

Superfun song, I can dance to it, I can bounce to it, I can eat food to it- err....

ANYWAY, I love it! Faved.....gah, I want to rant moar about how I love this song, but that little yellow number next to "Characters Remaining" keeps getting smaller. >_>

5/5
10/10

I'd say "looking forward to your next song," but you apparently aren't coming back. I can sympathize with you on the zero bombing thing though, it's absurdly aggravating.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[dances around the room multiple times]

I freaking love you for this. The song is just as, if not MOAR epic than part 1!!!! Words cannot describe the epicness I feel when I listen to this song. So I will cut this review short right here and say:

5/5
10/10

Looking forward to your next song, as always!

Indigorain responds:

Lemme dance around the room with you :D
Thanks a lot for the review man, It's awesome to know that I've got some people that love my music :D

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