Kinda ouch.
That high synth is really squaky and high pitched. I'd suggest turning the pitch down on it at certain points in the song.
Otherwise it's a great song! 2:09 was my fave part. :D
Btw, I don't quite get what you mean with the author comments...
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That'ssssss a nice sssssong you got there....
Bahahaha! I love this!
It's a little quiet, so you need to turn up the volume on the entire track a few notches. (no pun intended)
Other than that I can totally play minecraft to this. xD
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Thank you! The Minecraft note block samples are very quiet, so I'll up those a few Notches next time (pun intended :P). Actually, I'll reupload a louder version of this one a bit later.
Edit: done.
Title can just go die in a hole.
Nicely done.....kthxbai.
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Choppy, but moody.
It's kinda choppy in the beginning; but it starts getting better as the song goes on. The "Activate" bit, I'd say ditch it or replace it with something else. I don't think it would work in the track's mood. Right now it sounds a bit like HH, but that's just me.
It's nice, but needs lots of work. You have a good foundation, so make something epic with it! :D
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P.S. Those lyrics.....no. Just no.
Thank you. The lyrics aren't serious. They are just things I made up a long time back. They were never serious things. with the first one it started by watching the cereal straw commercial. Me and my friend Adam were just sitting there, and I started singing along only replacing the words with things. The the I'm gonna part I based that off of something, but I don't remember. The second one my friend diego told me to rap and he started beat boxing, so I just said that. It was completely out of no where and I got really embarrassed.
Not enough going on.
It's good, but it needs more filler. Try looking into some really ambient pads or white noise in the background. Maybe even a little telephone ring in the background before that first drop would work nicely. :)
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Good stuff, but you still have room for improvement. I can relate, though, lol. I have problems with this kinda thing too. It's either too much going on or not enough going on.
Thanks for the detailed review!
I agree that I thought the song sounded empty at times and just needed that bit more, I might come back to it one day and try to improve it.
Haha, well i'm glad i'm not the only one struggling :P i'll try harder next time though!
WHHOOOOAAARRGGGG
So-fucking-incredible.
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thankyouvery-fucking-much >:D
Ooooh, this one is an old one.
Wow...I remember this one from last year.
Gratz on making it to the top 100 again! I guess I should finally write a review on this one.
But everything is pretty much perfect so this review is kinda useless....
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Need you...'re MUSIC MAOR.
Oh my freaking god. Just....ARRGHH. I mean, it's like....AS;JDKFAJWEIGHj.
*ahem*
To clarify: I FUCKING LOVE IT.
I iz jelleh for those sounds btw. What sample packs you use?
I don't wanna put a freaking title.
Ok this song is ridiculous. Every-freaking-sound has it's own level of sheer epicness. I mean, seriously, at least give your opponent a chance at victory. xD
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Long live F-777!
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